I really love your Lij character. He is strong under a gracile appearance. He is haughty when the situation requires it but I knew he had a very good heart. Jack is fortunate he didn't attack another aristocrat instead. He'd be hanging as we speak. By the way, I liked how you succintly and efficiently let us know what Jack's life has been like.
Now, I wonder about that Monaghan cousin. I had to go back to the chapter the two boys met him. Hmmm. I can see the clues, but he didn't leave me we the impressin of being a villain. His father did, though. As for Cedric, there is something not quite clear going on with him. Can't wait to see Billy again.
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Date: 2007-03-11 07:19 pm (UTC)Now, I wonder about that Monaghan cousin. I had to go back to the chapter the two boys met him. Hmmm. I can see the clues, but he didn't leave me we the impressin of being a villain. His father did, though. As for Cedric, there is something not quite clear going on with him.
Can't wait to see Billy again.
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