I looked for this all day. It was a treat tonight, even though I could not see it until later. The kiss and the denial between the two. Gorgeous. Dom would have admitted more freely I think. He was very affected. And Lighe, very confused. I adored the moment when Dom was feeling aroused and fearful of being discovered, as Lighe teased him. I wondered if he really knew the state he had Dom in. It seemed so in this "But as Lighe smiled into Dom's eyes, he saw real distress lying there, and whispered so that none else heard. "Ah! I am sorry, Dom. I shall not tease you more. After all, I complained when you did it to me, did I not? Let us be friends, above all else." Lighe has a smooth but very firm command. You write him as one that can very believably be that proud, that strong, but also so incredibly vulnerable and yearning. The language and even the foods. The dialogue creates an air of mystery, and a rich comfort between all the characters. I loved this moment, "It is hardly fair that you should call the Prince of Amiens by his given name, yet not be familiar with me, whom you have known since my birth. Swidwulf. I pray you, I am Lighe." Then a great twist with his brother. Makes me wonder more what is going on. I wondered if Leofric knew of that twist. or hmmmmaybe he does. hmmmm. Lando so sick. Dom and Lighe comfort her in their ways. Ways she needs. Its all so incredible. Another world you have totally developed and made real. Hugs you Ru...xoxoxoxo v I will be looking next week, but if it is Sunday, may be later. Its my youngest's first communion.
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Date: 2008-04-28 04:37 am (UTC)The kiss and the denial between the two. Gorgeous. Dom would have admitted more freely I think. He was very affected. And Lighe, very confused. I adored the moment when Dom was feeling aroused and fearful of being discovered, as Lighe teased him. I wondered if he really knew the state he had Dom in. It seemed so in this "But as Lighe smiled into Dom's eyes, he saw real distress lying there, and whispered so that none else heard. "Ah! I am sorry, Dom. I shall not tease you more. After all, I complained when you did it to me, did I not? Let us be friends, above all else." Lighe has a smooth but very firm command. You write him as one that can very believably be that proud, that strong, but also so incredibly vulnerable and yearning.
The language and even the foods. The dialogue creates an air of mystery, and a rich comfort between all the characters. I loved this moment,
"It is hardly fair that you should call the Prince of Amiens by his given name, yet not be familiar with me, whom you have known since my birth. Swidwulf. I pray you, I am Lighe."
Then a great twist with his brother. Makes me wonder more what is going on. I wondered if Leofric knew of that twist. or hmmmmaybe he does. hmmmm.
Lando so sick. Dom and Lighe comfort her in their ways. Ways she needs.
Its all so incredible. Another world you have totally developed and made real.
Hugs you Ru...xoxoxoxo v I will be looking next week, but if it is Sunday, may be later. Its my youngest's first communion.