I loved this.. I loved the fact that you took away assumptions and allowed them to face the honest truths. Except the one moment when Elijah freaked...understandably so. (Dom going mad...funny)You let Elijah really observe and see Dom and know that it wasn't what it seemed enough he asked him...why did you wound me? Then Dom can thankfully give him the truth. I loved their affection at the end...it made me feel so mushy and soft for them. Elijah has had such a rough time in life. It is so good he has someone he can turn to and feel the love he deserves. I have to go back and look at the parts with Jack and Giles again..did't see that coming. You made me happy that's for sure. Great Sunday morning with the story and a wee relief from the angst. love you and this! xoxo v
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Date: 2007-03-04 05:30 pm (UTC)I have to go back and look at the parts with Jack and Giles again..did't see that coming.
You made me happy that's for sure. Great Sunday morning with the story and a wee relief from the angst. love you and this! xoxo v