Date: 2007-01-07 02:49 am (UTC)
What a beautiful chapter! I loved the part on the ship with Elijah being so excited about the adventure and learning about how the boa...vessel worked. Then him wanting to sit on the deck and watch the stars. Of course, Dom wrapping the blanket around them both and then Elijah laying his head on Dom's shoulder was sweet. And poor Dom and Arthur, what a heart-tugging tale. Now we know that Elijah has never had anyone. What a revelation. It is joyous to see Elijah so happy and carefree. Then there is the nipple biting, hugging and kissing. I'm sure the next chapter will be most rewarding as well. : D

I love what Dom's ship was named: Ariadne

Thanks for posting this chapter so soon. It gave me something nice to read on a Saturday night!

Oh, and *squee* about the manips.

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