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I thought you might like to see this - ODQ - Our Drama Queen - and I wrote it as a challenge for (and from) Lady Sunrope when ODQ was here visiting me recently. We wrote one line each. It was my turn to write, but I liked it as it was - so the last line is ODQ's! :D

WARNING! BDSM, NC-17 and all that, but it makes up somewhat for Woss's saccharine approach to Li'l Lij last night. :D





Shakespeare it ain't - but we had a pleasant afternoon writing it!


Elijah leaned over the bed, a feral grin widening his mouth, and solicitously murmured into Dom's ear. "Are you comfortable, Sblom?"

Dom bared his teeth. "Fuck you! You know I can't be comfortable chained up like this and with a plug the size of a bean can shoved up my arse. Fuck you!"

"Poor Sblomie," Elijah purred, "Is this more comfortable?" With that he pulled the chains a little tighter yet, causing Dom to release a string of colourful swear words.

"You bastard!" Dom twisted his head and tried to catch Elijah's hand with his teeth, but Elijah was too quick for him.

"Dom, stop whining. You know you like it - why else would we do it?" Elijah said, gripping the plug and turning it a whole revolution before pulling it swiftly out.

Dom barely managed to suppress his protesting howl, and it took him a couple of seconds to recover, his ass throbbing with a sensation that seemed to consist of equal measures of pleasure and pain. He panted. "Because... you get off ...on me swearing... like a sailor?"

"Of course I do, you cunt!" said Elijah, casting the plug aside and thrusting into Dom wtih one swift sharp movement. He gasped as Dom closed around him, encasing him in stinging heat.

"Nnnnngh!" Dom threw his head back, closing his eyes against the stars flashing in front of them.

Lij rested his head on Dom's chest for a moment, keeping himself still, before starting to thrust into his lover's body hard and fast. "What... no smart... comeback?" Elijah grunted.

"Love you like this!" Dom managed, as the heat of the cinnamon lube bit into the soft skin of his balls.

Lij leant foward and kissed Dom as the whiteout took him. He thrust hard one more time, and fell on Dom's chest as Dom came, pressing Dom's cock between their two heaving bellies.

Elijah waited for his heart to stop racing before sliding out of his lover's body and reaching out to release Dom's wrists from the chains. He gently pulled down Dom's arms, turning them on their sides to face each other and massaging Dom's wrists. As he looked into those blue-grey eyes, he felt his throat constrict.

Dom smiled softly up at him. "I know."

Date: 2006-12-02 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laeliacatt.livejournal.com
eeeeee! Wonderfulness!

Date: 2006-12-02 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ourdramaqueen.livejournal.com
Eeeeeeeeeeeh!!! That was such fun! :D

Date: 2006-12-02 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com
Sizzling so hot it almost burned up the screen.

Date: 2006-12-02 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cat-luvs-guysx2.livejournal.com
Very, very nice. :D

Date: 2006-12-02 09:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verangel.livejournal.com
Good God that was hot...love the banter in between...phew...good thing you can't see my tongue hanging out.
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Date: 2006-12-03 10:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ismenin.livejournal.com
ODQ and I thank you! xxx

Date: 2006-12-03 10:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ismenin.livejournal.com
It really WAS! Snogs! xxx

Date: 2006-12-03 10:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ismenin.livejournal.com
They can burn me any time! xxx

Date: 2006-12-03 10:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ismenin.livejournal.com
Thank you! xxx

Date: 2006-12-03 10:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ismenin.livejournal.com
Ha! Glad you like it! xxx

Date: 2006-12-03 12:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janejanejane.livejournal.com
Mmmmm yes, quite an antidote... ;D

Loved it! Thanks to you both, you made my morning, LOL

*hugs*

How you feeling today, dearest Issi? I've been worried...

Date: 2006-12-03 12:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ismenin.livejournal.com
Thank you, Janie! Still breathing! :D xxx

Date: 2006-12-03 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ourdramaqueen.livejournal.com
Yes we do! *blush*

Date: 2006-12-03 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ourdramaqueen.livejournal.com
Eeeep, thank you! *blush*

Date: 2006-12-03 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ourdramaqueen.livejournal.com
Glad you like it! *blush*

Date: 2006-12-03 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ourdramaqueen.livejournal.com
Eeep! *giggle* Thank you, glad you like it! :D

Date: 2006-12-03 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ourdramaqueen.livejournal.com
Thank you - I hope it was as much fun to read for you as it was to write for us! :D

Date: 2006-12-03 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janejanejane.livejournal.com
Well, I'm not sure how it was for you, but it was very good for me! ;P

Thanks again!

Date: 2006-12-04 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/saura_/
oooooooooooooooooooooooh *THUD*

*stands up and applauses like crazy*

I had the pleasure to meet ODQ in person at Ring*Con and she's a fantastic woman, indeed. Never thought she would be writing something like this, though. SUCH A NICE SURPRISE! *grins like crazy*

You two made a perfect tandem for this story and I do hope it repeats!

Date: 2006-12-05 10:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ismenin.livejournal.com
Still waters run deep as they say in these parts! Glad ODQ surprised you here, Saura! Hugses! xxx

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