Sorry for the delay in sending feedback, but I wanted to finish my current book last night, "The Colour" by Rose Tremain.
Anyway, I really enjoyed this opening chapter, plenty of scope for the two main characters to develop their relationship from hatred to something more errr... friendly ;-D They haven't exactly got off to a good start!
You have set the scene very well and described your mystery city vividly. I wonder where it is? Obviously, Elijah is a man of fastidious habits who knows what he wants! I really like his personality. Dominic doesn't seem quite the *boor* that he appeared at first to Elijah...
Thanks for this, I just *know* I'm going to enjoy this new series of yours!
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Anyway, I really enjoyed this opening chapter, plenty of scope for the two main characters to develop their relationship from hatred to something more errr... friendly ;-D They haven't exactly got off to a good start!
You have set the scene very well and described your mystery city vividly. I wonder where it is? Obviously, Elijah is a man of fastidious habits who knows what he wants! I really like his personality. Dominic doesn't seem quite the *boor* that he appeared at first to Elijah...
Thanks for this, I just *know* I'm going to enjoy this new series of yours!
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